Thursday, May 20, 2010

Outline

 Outline
I. Introduction
a. It takes place in home and in school. In the year of 1922 in New York.
b. The main characters Diana, Mary, Larry ,and Jerry and lastly the mother
c. I will have a foreshadow in my story.

II. Raising actions
a. My main characters will become grate friends and they won't carry what they mother says.
b. The mother wants Diana to have a good job and she also wants Diana to bring her money because the mom doesn't want to look for a job.

III. Climax  
a. The most important event of the story is when Diana looses all her friends because she is being selfish.
b. The turning point of the story is when they start being friends and stop argued 

IV. Falling actions
 a. The dimax is when Diana starts helping her sister.
b. Diana and Mary and the twins were surprised.

V. Resolution
 a. Diana learn that it is not good to do nothing around the house everyday. The sister Mary and the brothers Larry and Jerry learned to get along with her sister.
b. The characters learned to not argue with each other and to get along.

Novel Project

                                             My name is Diana I have one sister and two brothers. I am 12 years old. I am in seventh grade. My sisters name is Mary  my brothers are twins their names are Larry and Jarry. My sister is 14 and my brothers are 15 about to turn 16. My mother loves me more then my sister or brothers. She loves me more because I get go grads. I have a grate life because I never had to do chores because mommy makes my sister do them for. My mom doesn't want me to work. She doesn't want me to work because she wants me to get a job and bring her fame. In second grade  my teacher told my mom that I can go to fourth grade. My mom said no beacause then I would be the youngest in my class. When I was in therd grade my teacher told my mom if I would want to go to fourth grade. My mom said "no because I would be the youngest and people would bother her and make fun of  her." Then when I was in fifth grade they ask me if  I would want to go to sixth grade. My mom said OK because I am getting mad of  Diana's teachers asking me if I want to skip grade. So I went to seventh grade.

Tuesday, February 9, 2010

3. The writer might have wanted to explan how Galdika was befor and after it got to lives. Also how

Thursday, January 14, 2010

Why it is a bad day for me?

Today was a bad day. It was bad because I thought that me and my brother were just playing a game. It turned  out we weren't playing because he throw snow at my face. Then he took me by my hands and throw me at the snow. I fell on my face. When I was getting up Byron throw an other snow ball. The snow ball hit me in my face. That really hurt I wanted to go inside crying but I didn't because I thought Byron and Buphead would laugh. When I got inside I was sill cold also my eyes were watery. Joetta asked me what happen I didn't want to tell her so I didn't. Joetta got really mad at me because I didn't tell her the truth. Joetta told me she was going to tell mom that won't tell her what is wrong. When mommy and daddy got home I was already changed from my outer close so they won't notice any thing. Then they went to my room and sow the wet cloths they ask me"why is there wet cloths in your room" then I got really scared thinking what to tell them. I told them a lied to them. 

On the next momma told me Byron to go buy groceries. When we got there we got the things we needed.When we had to go on line I told Byron we had to sign a paper that daddy would sign. Then Byron went to hid in the comic until I had to sign witch mead me really nerves because Byron told me it's for poor people. That is everything went wrong for me.